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Fanfiction Horrors: Death Note by alantongirl, literature

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Fanfiction Horrors: Death Note

(The following fanfiction is a story I wrote when I was 11. Yes, it is terrible, which is why I'm giving it to ~Charce for Christmas. It was meant to stay in the depths of my journals for eternity, but I feel as if it is time for me to show some generosity and sacrifice. This may hurt my ego, and this may hurt the entirety of the Death Note community along with South Park, Mario Kart, and many other fandoms, but I'm willing to take a few wounds from this catastrophe. It's about time that I, Cam, owned up to the mistakes I made in the past so you all will learn to never repeat them. This is the multi-parter known as "Random Death Note Crack

Christmas Wish by alantongirl, literature

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Christmas Wish

The street lights of Hew shined bright brightly as I paced back and forth in front of the amphitheatre. Where was he? He promised to arrive here at 7 on the dot, what was taking him so long? I began feeling as if my body was freezing and with the snow constantly blinded my sight, it was difficult to stay put when the theatre's warm aroma was so close by. I tried to convince myself to quit complaining, but my mind would always come up with another excuse. Before I could argue again, a familiar face appeared. "Lee! What are you doing here?" Gene said as he approached me, "It's cold out." I playfully punched him on the shoulder, "I didn't no

The Aftermath by alantongirl, literature

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The Aftermath

He walked alone, oblivious to his surroundings, yet he didn't budge. He looked at the invisible floor, with something crossing his face. Was it sadness? Was it guilt? It couldn't be guilt, for all he had done for us; I'm the one who should be feeling guilty... --- *** SPOILERS FOR THE ENDING OF MOTHER 3. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED*** --- It's amazing how one misunderstanding, one problem, one person, can change the lives of thousands. How it can change the fate of our world. How it can ruin my life. It was only three years ago when we had visited Mom's old house in the mountains. The luscious, beautiful mountains, home to the sweet Dragos. A

The Lonely 'Forever Alone' Star by alantongirl, literature

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The Lonely 'Forever Alone' Star

The eerie night faded away into a glorious shade of orange and pink. The cold satellite retreated in a confident sink. The day had rose, and the sky glimmered, But the lonely star could only shiver. It burned a thousand suns, it incinerated all, If the barrier was lost, all life would fall. But it took a lot to stand on its own, Even though it was nearly full grown. The rock at night wasn't alone, accompanied by the stars, And its reach was much closer to Mars. During the night where the living slept, The rock knew that the stars had become adept. Adept to its appearance, however troublesome, They gave it a special warmth that c

Guardian of Boosting by alantongirl, literature

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Guardian of Boosting

The light beacon enveloped me in its glory, slowly regenerating my health. As I awaited my energy tanks to be completely full, the dark shadow of a Warrior Ing stained the tunnel that lied in front of me. It's alien eyes followed my every step inside the light circle, waiting for me to strike. Judging from the artifact that was out of my reach, I knew I had to find the Boost Ball. The light beacon stood in the middle of a half pipe, and it begged for me to boost out of it to get my hand on the artifact. Obviously this wouldn't happen, seeing as the beast in front of me held my treasure. Once my energy returned to its normal state, I rushed

Equivalent to Hell's School by alantongirl, literature

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Equivalent to Hell's School

This is my new school, I thought, staring thoroughly at the crumbled paper in front of me. It hadn't been in the best shape when I got it, and it seemed less welcoming than it was supposed to seem. On it was direction to my new school- A school whose name I still don't know. It is odd, being suddenly invited to this exotic, unfamiliar place. I have been told that this new school offered the best education in the nation; I find that hard to believe. Looking up from my paper, I expect a rich landscape before me, full of life, lives of multi-millionaires. Instead, I find a rundown building that looks like it had taken a dozen bombs to it and

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How to Not Screw Up a Fanfiction by alantongirl, literature

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How to Not Screw Up a Fanfiction

EDIT: HANG ON GUYS, THIS IS GETTING A MAJOR EDIT, SO HOLD ON. Introduction Fanfiction has a terrible reputation due to the amount of inexperienced authors that don't care for criticism. Since the majority decide that their writing is as good as it gets, they keep going with the same annoying clichés that we've seen every day. They never seem improve, thus writing "BAD" all over them. Unfortunately, due to the amount of immature fangirls and fanboys that pollute the internet, the vast majority of fanfiction is covered by these authors. What they need to realize is that criticism isn't there to make them feel terrible. Taking criticism can

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Apr 29
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Hello people of DeviantArt, so glad you happened to land on my page!

I am an official beta on FanFiction and FictionPress and I'm currently open for anyone interested. I have a balanced bunch of both fanfiction and original work, complete with terrible art (Because I really, REALLY shouldn't be drawing). I am always open for criticism, I mean, why wouldn't I?

I plan on writing a couple articles and planned out reviews for fanfiction, so keep an eye out for those.

I don't really except much crap from others, but my conscious will usually get the best of me and I'll end up giving more praise than criticism. This means that I'm generally nice when I review, but I still know what I'm doing.

FanFiction.net: Cam is for Camera

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E-Mail: camisforcamera@yahoo.com

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alantongirl

Feb 1, 2014

ssshhhhh

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I'm gonna post a couple art stuff things now I sort of put them on Tumblr and then I realized, "Wait I have a DeviantArt why don't I use it" So yeah no one must knowwww

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alantongirl

May 25, 2013

GUESS WHO'S BACK

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BACK AGAIN OK, YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE. WE GOTTA WEBCAMIC THIS PLACE. AND I'M RPING AND BETA READING SO DON'T SAY I DIDN'T WARN YOU. (btw How to Not Screw Up a Fanfiction is updating again just saying)

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alantongirl

Feb 7, 2013

UPY-DATEY-DOO (Updates)

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So I've been rethinking my involvement in the many websites on and I've come to the conclusion that FictionPress is probably the preferable one for now. Don't get me wrong, I love DA, it's just that "How to Not Screw up a Fanfiction/ Story in General" needs a LOT of updating and work (I can't thank the commenters for their advice. It helps tremendously). So for now, keeping the aforementioned guide up-to-date is my main concern. In other stunning news, I'm social. If you couldn't tell through the unnecessary amounts of hiatus, I've been pushed and pulled by school, friends, and family quite often as of now. I can't say that's a bad thing, bu

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